No Longer Home, but Rather Belonging

Inspirational / Motivational Poetry Human Written by Dance_Addie ·
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Empty house, full of memories.

Filled boxes, empty of joy.

Roads and roads away,
from where one day.
You met the place you love the most.

You dance once more,
You take one more bow,
You sing one last time,

With the people you hate and love the most.

In the car,
Tension and nerves,

Dark,
Humid,
Stale.

Stale as the cookies you bought the last time you went shopping with your best friend.
Except now, you would only be “long distance,”
no longer just “best friends.”

Life moves on,
Like the car you’re in right now;
The blue-grey car.
The one your parents bought just months before you left.

Now you’re stuck.
Stuck where you know no one.

No Delaney to laugh with,
No Charlee to jokingly make fun of,
No Valerie to watch nostalgic movies with,
No Will to cry over.

You wonder who will be the first to talk to you as you walk through the studio doors.

“Sorry, door. I’m so use to there being more than one.”

Two rooms,
One study room,
Purple padded walls,
sparkle wallpaper.

“Or is it paint? I can’t tell.”

You walk up the stairs full of doubt and thoughts of being less of a dancer,
Less of a person.

You suddenly notice how the clouds are arranged in the sky.
The sky doesn’t look friendly,
Just like all of these people.

“I’m Lilah!”

“Hey!”

You examine her every feature;

Brown hair,
That’s also wavy.
Blue top,
The same color you wore yesterday.
Navy, but almost black booty shorts.
One ear piercing,
But you knew she would look good with two.

“I just moved here from South Carolina.”

She gave tips,
Helpful ones:

Restaurants,
Ice cream shops,
Malls,
Everything.

“Wow, she’s really nice.”
You say to yourself.

You’ve been down since December,
The month you found out you were moving.

But now it’s July and you’re back up and running.

The summer goes on and you talk to her more,
And more,
And more.

More than you would have dared to back home.

Well…

Home?

Back there, you would not have even uttered a word.
Not a sentence that you would even THINK just ONE person would find offensive.
It didn’t matter when or where you were, or who you were with.

You realized you were too much for everyone.
You went silent.
You knew things would be so much better that way.

Once, you were at school, talking to your best friend about how Gracie was saying how stupid and loud you were, nothing directly about her.

Only, the next day, you walked through the grey, metal, bulletproof double doors, to see your best friend and Gracie talking—

Gracie then looks you up and down.

You wonder if Lilah will end up the same as you’re texting her.

Before you left
You knew you were the problem, the issue.
You wanted it to end
But you knew once you left, it would follow you.

Yet Lilah made you think differently, because she actually values you, and the people around you act and talk the same way you do.

Lilah’s the only person who has ever valued your true worth,
Your full worth.

You text everyday;

You vent…
You talk about emotions…
School…
Fake friends…
All of it.

She gave you glasses to see that there are good people, not just toxic ones.

You go to dance on a random Thursday and you say to yourself,

“I love life.”

It was the first time you ever truly meant it.

“It was the environment.”
Lilah said to you, as she was the only one who heard you.

She knows about your life with Sarah, who never celebrated you.
Your life with Gracie, who said you deserved to have your heart broken.
Your life with everyone at school, who just saw you as wasted product.

Tuesday, July 7th, 9:48 pm,
The first day you say anything to Lilah.

“It’s okay, I’m here, I’m real.”

Those words changed you,
The words changed your entire life.

You see that life is different…
Different but good.

You eventually have your first choreography session for a competition dance;

You’re wearing a black halter bra with two white stripes along the bottom and black Lulu pants.

You notice the 12 girls around you, you think they look nice and friendly, the opposite of what you thought two weeks ago.

“Stupid Deep”

“What if who I hoped to be was always me?”

“The love I fought to feel was always free?”

The part you’re given, is so incredibly gut-wrenching for you.

You somehow force your way through rehearsal, even though you feel like bawling until you fill eight bath tubs.

You slowly realize that “home” was never your home,

Because you never felt welcome, but you do here.

How did this poem make you feel?

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The poem explores themes of change, loneliness, and the search for connection through the lens of a person moving to a new place. It effectively captures the emotional turmoil and eventual solace found in new friendships, though it occasionally suffers from a lack of poetic refinement. The narrative voice is sincere and relatable, providing a genuine reflection on personal growth.

Strengths

  • The poem effectively captures the emotional complexity of moving and starting anew, as seen in lines like 'Empty house, full of memories.'
  • The narrative progression from loneliness to finding solace is compelling, particularly in the development of the relationship with Lilah.
  • The poem uses relatable imagery and scenarios, such as 'Stale as the cookies you bought the last time you went shopping with your best friend,' to evoke a sense of nostalgia and loss.

Areas for Improvement

  • The poem lacks a consistent structure, which can make it feel disjointed, particularly in transitions between memories and present experiences.
  • Some lines, such as 'You’re wearing a black halter bra with two whit,' are incomplete or abruptly cut off, disrupting the flow and coherence of the poem.

Imagery

The poem employs vivid imagery to convey emotions and settings, such as the 'blue-grey car' symbolizing transition and the 'purple padded walls' of the new environment. The use of color and sensory details, like 'Dark, Humid, Stale,' effectively evokes the protagonist's emotional state. However, the imagery occasionally lacks depth, relying on straightforward descriptions without deeper metaphorical layers.

Structure

The poem lacks a formal structure, with varying line lengths and an absence of a consistent rhyme scheme. This free verse approach mirrors the chaotic emotions of the speaker but can also lead to a lack of cohesion. The narrative is organized into a loose chronological order, though some sections feel abruptly introduced or concluded.

Language & Craft

The diction is conversational and accessible, which suits the narrative style but sometimes detracts from the poetic quality. The tone is earnest and introspective, capturing the protagonist's internal struggles and growth. There is limited use of linguistic techniques like alliteration or assonance, which could enhance the musicality of the poem.

Emotional Impact

The poem successfully conveys the protagonist's journey from isolation to acceptance, with a particularly poignant moment when Lilah's words 'It's okay, I'm here, I'm real' signify a turning point. The emotional depth is genuine, though the impact is occasionally lessened by structural and linguistic inconsistencies.

Generated by Openai (gpt-4o) on Aug 09, 2026 23:49

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